You know...
Who is that?
That handsome man…
The man
In my dreams
Unaffected
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You know...
Who is that?
That handsome man…
The man
In my dreams
Unaffected
Rugged
Rough
Harsh
Drugged-like-eyes
Yet clearer than a still lake
In his eyes
I see
Me
Crystal
Clear
A song
Unsung
Long forgotten
A melody
Refuses
To Sleep
That stubble
It roughs on my
Mind's lips
I open
In
Thirst Throes...
Who is that lean?
An attitude
That’s tough
A facade
That’s kind
Only in heart
Who is that man?
The man in my dreams
Loves like there is no tomorrow
The hair on his forehead
Caress only in everafters
Why is it that touch?
Him
In places he doesn’t feel
But the seared skin
Imprint in his brain cells
Through those
Deep eyes
Swim … drown..
Gasp
For a breather
Does he know?
Sink
Die
Love
Even more
This passion
It’s yours
This love
You own
Mine
I say
You
You know
Who I
Am
Close
Ajit,
:) Ok, fiction, if you say so...
But give it a passing chance, atleast once, okay?
Thanx for the comment.
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Ok READY nup..!
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A FICTION OF LIFE!
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EW
Yes Temptations..more so...Peacocks on my terrace...with clouds on the skies rains and rainbows...music to soothe....
Cup of coffee has to be the....when we sit to chat...
What say?
Nupur
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Bhavna,
Thanx for the girly girl comment :D Some girls never grow outta the dream age.....hahahaha :D
Thanx for liki
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Heyyy EW,,
especially wen itzzz abtt dreamy guyyyy thingieee,, i like it even betterr heheehheeh... 

i likedd tis poem... it flowssss n takes u in dreamzzzz... n i alwayzz luv a dreamy poem..
d concludin linesss r too gudddd...
This passion
It’s yours
This love
You own
Mine
I say
You
You know
Who I
Am
rgds
Bhavna
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Nup..,
Temptations...temptations,...just for a terrace full f flowers....just for a cup of coffee over a chat....just for the reminiscence of dreams,...Delhi...I will be thine :) :D ;)
Thanx 4 comin :)
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Ew
One day I will tell you about that Elusive MAN in my dreams...till then
the moment
the bliss
the lifetime
the emotions
the storms
the heavens
the passions
But to tell you ...all I dream you and me have to meet haha
Nupur
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Req,
Sorry I was thinking of Kunal Kapoor :P he he he
It was lucid, water element, but not as in waves, it was more of rains...rains that wash out, rains that fall like a pot a drop, rains that poke u and pierce you like little safety pins...
A moment in eyes, a lifetime in lies, an everafter in bliss...doesnt rhyme, but it was a moments inspiration...when I look again, I am going eeeewww! Where does all those beautiful moments go...isnt it....like gone with a second :)
Thanx for being here, for keeping hopes alive in a trickle of comments...nobody understands the poetry I write.....waaaaaaah!
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almost forgot... the man in your dreams... is Keanu Reeves [hey, that rhymes (; ]
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