Bolt from Blue

May 2 2008  | Views 464 |  Comments  (18)
Bolt from Blue -EnchantedWorld   He sucked at her breast softly. They felt like mangoes, rip... Expand

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  enchanted world posted 3 mnths ago

Thanx Maya :)



  mayaonline posted 3 mnths ago

Oops, didn't see it b4.  LIked this. short & crisp & story moves :)



  enchanted world posted 3 mnths ago

Mel,

Stories are like that naah...we can write it to save the child...get the cops to act, parents to be sort of understanding....u think in real life, the child can be saved after being dangerously close to stuff lke that....NEVER....n which guy will wait n wait to make children comfortable and all that...the first chance and they will hurt and leave the scene.....no second takes even...

Here the girl is a willing compatriot...how many cases, when kids get abused when they are gettin inside homes afer school alone, and in gallis and lifts and corridors....u will be amazed by the madness of these perverts....

Yea, reality bites and sucks, big time!

Hey thanx for coming over :)



  enchanted world posted 3 mnths ago

Bhavna,

Thanx. 

Wish all kids cud do what this girl did. Atleast from an edge. Its tuff on the parents too, but then one has to pay the price at some time or the other, for leaving kids unattended at home,, whatever maybe the reason...

Thanx for the appreciation. 



  Melody Queen posted 3 mnths ago

EW
Reality bytes. Shocking and sad that these things have become commonplace in today's world. Atleast the girl knew to trust her instincts when it didn't feel right, small mercies. And the cops acted, for a change. Not all are lucky :-(

Well narrated.



  enchanted world posted 3 mnths ago

Indu,

Its really bad, I know, but there are many kids who suffer this way. I wrote this story after reading an article in a malayalam mag. Its happening in schools, thats the worst part.

Thanx for your encouraging words :)



  enchanted world posted 3 mnths ago

Roba,

You are right, unfortunately, the child here cud be a woman too :(

One always gotta watchout for roaming predators. Never send the wrong signals, that must keep people who want to be safe.

Thankyou for being here.



  enchanted world posted 3 mnths ago

lifeagain,

Welcome Back! 

You are correct too the T. Channel of communication is what is needed, continuous non intermittent and supportive, the rest will follow....but I guess that is the toughest to achieve, esp as kids approach adoloscence....they shut up like a clam...

Thanx for ur stoic support :)



  enchanted world posted 3 mnths ago

Vish,

Today's world is fast. Each gen thot it was the raciest. The gen nex outsmarts that....but then and now, sensibility exists...we must teach our kids to know, right from wrong...everything is ok, within limits 

Thanx for being here. Maybe some teens will read this and know :)



  enchanted world posted 3 mnths ago

Reqie,

Sorry for the late ack. was sick.

I am making  the title- childhood, departed...ur suggestion...my modification :)

Some stories are like that naah, packed with a punch...flows without deviation, tanx for the review :D





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