The Dream

Apr 5 2008  | Views 178 |  Comments  (16)
The Dream In a life so real That I could be yours In truth A love so divine Only to lo... Expand

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  enchanted world posted 3 mnths ago

Thankyou Req, Your words much valued on this one :) Nice to make something that is golden...shines like fire thru :) blazing...in golden flames...exists without an exit :D



  requiem posted 3 mnths ago

beautiful.. absolutely loved it... esp the last lines... it exists... without an exit... perfect ending (: really felt like being in a golden dream (:



  enchanted world posted 3 mnths ago

Bhavna,

:) Thankyou for enjoying



  bhavna14 posted 3 mnths ago

Hey EW,

tatz a vry beautifully written verse.. enjoyed every bit of it.. 

Ciao
Bhavna



  enchanted world posted 3 mnths ago

Thankyou kelda :)



  Kelda Boydston posted 3 mnths ago

The imagery was sweet, the struggle universaland  the unknown was mesmerizing
Kelda



  enchanted world posted 3 mnths ago

Madhvi,

Thankyou :)



  enchanted world posted 3 mnths ago

bmw,

If its so beautiful, it must exist, like its a canvas made from a brush much stronger than our cognition, a pen greater than our souls, a song more melodious than the best....then it does exist....for sure it does in our imagination...it must elsewheer too :)



  enchanted world posted 3 mnths ago

Indu,

Everytime you visit here....u leave me an enchanting comment...Truly I feel like an enticing entity....just 4m from ur comments :)



  enchanted world posted 3 mnths ago

Nup..,

Ur words....painting in words, steps in dance, poetry in eyes, rhythm in music....it takes u to a netherland....the same place in my dreams :)





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