MYSTRY mingled in the myth of misty minds

Mar 27 2007  | Views 1534 |  Comments  (21)
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  enchanted world posted 1 year ago

Pakhi,
 
Heeeey! I was waitin for ur cmts....ever since I posted....Yeah! I know...u got ur midsems!
But ur cmts...It was worth the wait...totally made my DAY!
 
Yes, Agree...Simple is Best...n Strongest is Kindest.....I always believe in that...
 
ya selected the lines I like more too....few more were there...still u touched  most....
 
And may the luck lustre of the magic of moonshine dust touch ur tad silver wings toooo.....u sort of have the lucky stardust  already...really...u understnd wat I am trying ta tell?
 
Thanku so much for coming....n the lovely lovely cmts....
I have a word to keep...will come soon....
 
Nupur,
 
Thank U soooo much....
Guess my kinda people arrived late....
ANd u know that line...wud havta paste the complete story....I went bananas peeling laughter...n it left a twinkle in my eyes and heart.....u know as I always quote...we all live for a little love and lots of laughs....
 
Thank U sooo much for coming...again...



  pakhi_littlebirdie posted 1 year ago

Enchanted,
this story had so many beautiful moments , for once...nah for more than once i drifted away weaving my own tales from this one. and thanks for making Zayan so human and simple. simple is the most beautiful you know.
and yes, the heroic tale of rose. she makes me feel proud...wish every woman had courage like her!
 
silver streaks of moonshine dust luck from the crimson wild poppies that bloomed after midnight.
this line was pure magic , from where did you think of such beautiful description...amazing!
 
He was committed to the weaving of golden invisible threads that held the entire world’s heart beat weft adroitly. For Love was truly an emotion present in the mental state that evolutes from the heart rather than anything physical.
 
yes, so true. it emnates from the heart and ends there again....nah it never ends does it?
 
Rose, our real life heroine, turned to see her sweetheart Zayan sleep next to her, in his innocent sleep on his side
 
wow! the picture of zayan sleeping is so beautiful...so innocent.
 
And they stayed that way forever in infinite peaceful eternity.
i love happy endings ...hehe. in which ever way they come
 
The oneness before the universe split to create infinity… an inseparable fusion of Love and Trust that created cosmic dust of the light and life of many universes yet to be born.
magic unfolded again , the moondust shone like never before i this story of yours , magic touched me  you know !!!
 
Pakhi
 



  keyaa1 posted 1 year ago

Hi
 
I just have no words
 
am speechless
 
amazing,beautiful, mesmerising.
Infact was going to paste some lines which I just loved but the would have ended in copy pasting the whole story lol
 
Keep writing
 
Nupur



  enchanted world posted 1 year ago

Life again,
 
Really hahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaa.....rolling...
 
Its okay....I wont comment on ur comment...but will wait ta catch ur cuppa taste....hahahahaaaaaaaa...again......lemme see....
 
Thanks for ur cmts ....cant help smiling wide...rather grinning.....blissfully .......unlike few other........he he he



  lifeagain posted 1 year ago

Hey EW,
 
What do I say...An honest comment on this...I guess u got a lil bit too entangled in bringing out the magic and the mystery and the fairy tale part of it that I just lost track of what I was reading..
 
The prose is excellent and the way you play with words is something that nobody can miss out on...Quite a quality that you possess.
 
But frankly this piece was a lil disappointing to me cos I didnt know what to make out of it...or mebbe this is one of those pieces that r best considered as a fairy tale....(I knw this line doesnt make any sense but this is precisely the same feeling that I went thru as well when I read this piece)
 
Another reason could be that fairy tales are not my cup of tea...hmmm this cud be a strong possibility.....
 
Hope u take this in the right spirit and pls pls do keep writing cos u are indeed gifted



  enchanted world posted 1 year ago

Superficial:
 
Really....Its is true that if love n trust fuses in all its fullness....without any trace of blemish...in all innocence....it will create that oneness.....
 
Thank u for coming....Thank u for seeing for I wanna portray....



  superficial posted 1 year ago

The oneness before the universe split to create infinity… an inseparable fusion of Love and Trust that created cosmic dust of the light and life of many universes yet to be born.

so true!



  enchanted world posted 1 year ago

Sup,
 
No hangups here too....I dont write for any particular brands.......
Never meant  ta pls all.....I have my own....on my own.....with my own....like it tat way...will keep it tat way....forever......he he he
 
Agree ta Disagree....Good



  supriyad posted 1 year ago

Enchantment.. Sure! I dont qualify for that list.. no hangups.. but then you dont write my brand of magic.. but then thats okay too! Few can! And I'm always game to agree to disagree!



  enchanted world posted 1 year ago

Sup,
 
Honesty is wat u will also get from me...
 
I never try too hard to create something....sort of waver ...n take time....but try too hard...Nope! I dont need to...else I wudnt be here...n wat I say toooo is never in an otherwise way.....don take it otherwise......u will understand...u are an intelligent gal...
 
Just as  they say...Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder...My magic will be beheld by the eyes that is meant to see it....the way it is....the way it was meant to be....For me ....I did my justice....
 
With all due respect to u......Maybe you dont qualify to that list......there is no point answering if u dont say wats in your mind....isnt it...I know u will appreciate the different viewpoints just as I had told you before....agree ta disagree.....all are not created in the same machines...
 
But perfect magic....I know there is none....n I know...I will never even qualify anywhere near perfection.....but then again....so be it...so be it....never asked for more....so be it....
 
:~>





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